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Look what thinking can get you

by Louis C. DePasquale

After an accident on the field playing baseball, a young man gains the ability to hear thoughts—and maybe more.

1,628 words Added Jun 2012 Updated 28 May 2022 21k views 4.6 stars (14 votes)

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Part 1

I am so glad that you are willing to listen to me, I really need to get this off my chest and I didn’t know whom else to talk to. For the last few week my life has been getting real strange. It started about three weeks ago in gym class, we were playing baseball. And you know just what a klutz I am when it comes to sports. Anyway I was standing there out in left field with the sun in my eyes. I started to daydream about Trey the stud they had playing catcher for the game. Too bad he is straight the things I would do to that boy. The next thing I remember is feeling this intense pain in my head and passing out. Would you believe I was so lost in undressing Trey that I got hit in the head with the baseball.

From what they told me it took about an hour for me to come back around but when I did I had a headache like you wouldn’t believe. After the headache subsided I went on to my next class and finished out my day. On the bus home from school it seems like I could hear someone talking to me but at such a distance that I couldn’t understand the words. However as the evening progressed I began to realized that I was hearing voices in my head.

The first thing I thought was shit where are the men in the white coats. As time went on, however, and I could understand more of what was being said, I realized that I was hearing the thoughts of people around me. At first it was real scary, that is until I ran into my older brother Tank, a defensive lineman on our high school football team. All Tank could think about was pussy. You can’t begin to understand just how disgusted I was by the thoughts I felt assaulting my mind. I mean I have nothing against straight guys, but who would want to share their thoughts. It just kept getting worse until finally I yelled out in my mind stop it, and believe it or not he did.

I didn’t know what to think I was just glad I was no longer being assaulted with images of naked women. Anyway for the next week or so I just went through my normal routine, with the added adventure of listening in on the thoughts of those around me. The only thing I did was yell at my brother to stop it every time he even started to think about girls, (which was just about all the time). After about a week or so of this things began to get real weird.

I was playing a really cool play station game I had just bought, when my Mom yelled for me to take out the trash. I didn’t want to stop playing the game, as I looked up there was my brother just sitting on the couch watching TV, he should empty the trash I thought to myself. Just then he stood up looked at me and said, “why don’t I empty the trash tonight.” Then he emptied it. I was really freaked. What had just happened?

When my brother came back into the room I decided to try a little experiment, I looked over at my brother at thought to myself, Tank you should go and get your little brother some ice cream from the kitchen. As soon as the thought finished, Tank stood up, went in to the kitchen and then came back a few minutes later with a big bowl of chocolate ice cream. He handed me the bowl and then sat back down in front of the TV.

I don’t know how I was doing it, but somehow I was controlling my football player brother. I decided to wait until later and see just how far this control would go. Since our house only has two bedrooms, my brother and I had to share one.

That night as we both lay in our separate beds, my brother once again began to think about naked women. That was it, I had enough. I turned on my side and looked over at my brother in the moonlight. Would you believe he was jerking off. Now in case you don’t know him, my brother tank is a big boy. He stands about 6ft 7in tall and weighs in at just under 350lbs every pound of it was muscle. He spent hours in the weight room at school trying to get bigger for football.

Like I said I was tired of all these images of naked women entering my mind, so as I looked at him I thought to myself: you know Tank naked women are ugly. As soon as I finished the thought guess what, no more naked women in my mind. He even stopped jerking off…. He just lay there obviously confused. Now as his brother I truly felt that it was my job to help end his confusion.

So I went on and repeated myself about how ugly naked women were but instead how sexually attractive naked men were. I could feel his mind trying to argue with itself about the concept of naked men, so I pressed on. “Tank, just imagine your friend Trey standing in front of you naked, you know that turns you on. Hot guys turn you on.” Slowly I could feel his mind beginning to relax and after a few seconds the image of Trey soaping his naked body in the shower after gym class began to enter my mind.

I started to think how much better this was than all those naked women, and believe it or not my brother started to jerk his cock again to the image of Trey soaping up his hot body. A few moments later my brother shot his load of cum into a rag he kept under his bed, and fell asleep with images of Trey’s naked body still running through his mind.

The next morning as we got up for school I noticed my brother staring at my naked body as I took my pj’s off. I made a point of standing around for a few minutes naked and I believe it or not he spent the entire time just staring at me, as his dick started to rise in his pj’s. After a few minutes of this, I looked over at him and told him I was going to jump in the shower. As I entered the bathroom adjoining our bedroom I stuck my head out the door looked at my brother and thought at him that he should join me in the shower.

A couple of seconds later I could see the shower curtain begin to move aside as my brother stepped into the shower with me. He had this puzzled look on his face as if he had no idea why he was in the shower. Feeling that it was a brother’s responsibility to help clear the confused look from Tank’s face, I thought to him how much he really wanted to suck his little brother’s dick. BAM right then and there he dropped to his knees garbed my cock in his hand and shoved it into his mouth.

The pleasure I began to feel was indescribable!!! I hate to admit it to people but while I may have been 17 I was still a virgin. So I was in no way prepared for the level of pleasure I would experience during my first blow job. Meanwhile Tank was still going down on me full hog. It was obvious that this was his first time sucking a dick, cause I could feel his teeth scraping my dick every once and a while.

After a couple minutes of this I began to feel my balls tighten up and my virgin load of cum start up my dick. Thinking to Tank about how much he wanted to swallow my load I started to shoot off in his mouth. It felt so incredible that I almost lost my balance.

When he finished swallowing my load I looked my brother in the eyes and thought about how much he had enjoyed swallowing his brother’s load and that it would be a great way to start off every morning. I got out of the shower dried off and started to get dressed for school. As my brother left the bathroom all he could think about was how tomorrow morning couldn’t come soon enough so he could get another load of my cum. I knew it was going to be a great day.

Like I said at the beginning I really needed to tell this to someone just to make sure that I wasn’t going crazy. But, now as I see the look in your eyes, I know that I made a mistake in trusting you. I look in your eyes and begin tell you to forget everything you just heard, all you will remember is just how attracted to me you are. No women you have ever seen turns you on the way I do. That’s nice I see the tent in your pants and I can move to the next step.


Author’s Note

This is my first mind control story and I would really appreciate any feedback that you all could give me. I also need to know if anyone is interested in reading the next part of my story where I spend a little time alone with Trey.

1,628 words Added Jun 2012 Updated 28 May 2022 21k views 4.6 stars (14 votes)

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